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  • Title: ?!!
  • Artist: kulta the wolf
  • Description: This is the first girl I drew with more of an anime style. Please comment and leave tips. Thanks!!
  • Date: 07/17/2008
  • Tags: girl anime
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Caliber Mengsk - 07/17/2008
  • The shoulders that you drew are flat, in real life, they are angled downward. That's the most major thing. Also, the chest needs to be moved up a bit, and the arms seem a little too thick as. The chest does need some work also. As far as the shape of the head, face, and hair, it's all drawn well. I would say check out "the official how to draw manga" guild. If you ask, they can do redlines, and give a very supportive crits. Hope this helps you better youself, C'ya. (darn 500 charactor limit...)
  • the_black_parade72 - 07/17/2008
  • the hair is a little bland, and the eyes are a little too dark. also, add something to the shirt (or use a different style shirt), and use some color. for a first draw, its a great start!
  • _-Crystal_-_Frost-_ - 07/17/2008
  • This is a good start, however her eyes are a little dead. You might wanna but just a little bit more shine into them. Also her chest needs to start higher up closer to her shoulders, otherwise her body looks too long.

    3/5, it's good! Forgive me if I make it sound like it's not . . . It just needs a few fixings here and there. ^-^
  • Retiki Muffin - 07/17/2008
  • The hair could use just a little more work, and the body needs something else to balance it more. But other than that, it's very good.
  • Fluffeh Panda - 07/17/2008
  • It's good for a first drawing. I actually have two tips for you. First for the body draw a skeleton using circles and basic shapes, also for the hair use thin and quick lines o it looks natural 5 stars
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