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  • .:♥_Here_In_Your_Arms_♥:.
  • Title: .:♥_Here_In_Your_Arms_♥:.
  • Artist: Vanilla Aliceuu
  • Description: This is just a small sketch of 2 of my OCs.
    I got the pose idea from Tokyo Mew Mew.
    i know i messed up on the girl's hands, (( i'm not good at drawing hands >.<))
    and the eye, on the guy looks a lil strange.
    but besides that, i rather like this sketch, so please NO RUDE OR MEAN COMMENTS!!!
    And don't yell at me saying 'BOOO!' i'm only 14 and STILL practicing!!!
    So i need suggestions ect.
    ((EdIt: this is my first time in arenas! yay!~<3))
  • Date: 11/27/2008
  • Tags: here your arms xxnekodeamonoflovexx couple
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Crimson Enigma - 11/28/2008
  • The girl is cute and well positioned in the frame, but try making a bit more room for the guy's head next time. The back of his head being cut off is okay, but the top of it being cut off, too makes the composition feel squished. And when you make squished compositions, it adds tension and a sense of anxiety to the piece.
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