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  • Avatar Art ~ Arianna Lukan
  • Title: Avatar Art ~ Arianna Lukan
  • Artist: Seremela Calafalas
  • Description: I did this avatar art a few weeks ago for a commission. I hate to say its not my best work, there is very little shading and I know I could have done so much more with it.
    However it seems like the people of the Art arena Love Avatar art. So here it is people of gaia.

    I really appreciate constructive criticism! So comment your thoughts.
  • Date: 12/29/2008
  • Tags: avatarart ariannalukan
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Veste - 10/02/2009
  • ...Last part, I swear. What I like about this is the overall pose, it has a nice sense of movement with the flowing folds of the dress. You did those very well, except for where it flares out at the front, that should have been tucked closer to her legs.
    The hairpin is bootiful! :"D <3
  • Veste - 10/02/2009
  • ...placed awkwardly. It's at the right level, but your legs are too long. The knees should have been covered by the bottom of the dress. The back folds in that dress are done very well, though! :"O
    Her arm turned out well, but obviously, maybe next time you could add in the hand? ;'D
    Another thing to mention is her hand lacks definition. The wrist is curved akwardly, and really...it looks a little bit more like a foot o____o;; Her calves also look really...goopy. xDD
  • Veste - 10/02/2009
  • The forehead is way too high. Even with her hair style, you would be able to see the beginning of the hairline underneath the bangs. Her face I won't comment on because it's anime, so that's generally a little difficult to critique. The structure on her torso is good, except for a few things. Her shoulder blades continue down too low, and don't tuck in enough to give her shape at the back. You did the front very well. Also her rump/tail is placed awkwardly...
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