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  • Title: Random manga girl
  • Artist: Azure-Kite13
  • Description: My first manga drawing and my first arena entry
    sorry if the lack of clothes disturbs anyone but clothes are harder to draw and it IS my first drawing.
  • Date: 01/31/2009
  • Tags: manga girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Miyuki_De_La_Luna - 07/23/2009
  • its coolio like nori said u could put a bathing suit on her i really dont care if she is naked somethings need a lil work like darkening the lines its awesome for ur first manga drawing my first time sucked xP i can only do heads im getting the body now but eh well great job draw more drawings u will do awesome!!! biggrin
  • yumekichigai - 02/08/2009
  • not bad for a first attempt... I really like the face and hair... just the lower body seems too small... even when taking in a perspective view. The Left leg (the one farther away) also doesn't seem like it's attached to the body... it's far too short and there is no hint of a hip bone farther up. Also the shoulder closest to us, the top shouldn't be a solid line. There should be an attachment made to the torso... I'm not trying to be mean, just some hints to improve a good start
  • i_am_emilz - 02/01/2009
  • its good u could at leats put a bathing suit on her... anyways i would also darken the lines (only if u put some sort of clothing on her) and i would fix the raised foot.
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