- Title: the girl i now
- Artist: fhdsku888
- Description: this is my first time using the computer on a drawing please tell me what i can improve on
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: girl
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Comments (5 Comments)
- NielgziL - 11/13/2010
- Studying the human anatomy really helps out a lot in finding where the facial features go. Try sketching while looking at a reference photo and get a feel for it smile That what I did when I wanted to improve on something.
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- Serina Kairu - 07/24/2009
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Don't make the eyes so big next time. They look too weird and they take up more than half of the face, which makes the rest of it look way scrunched together.
Try to proportion it a little more as well so that the head isn't WAY bigger than the body. I understand the whole "chibi" art is to have the head rather large, but you can't get carried away.
Also, the hair should flow more and have strands. It isn't just one long sheet.
Good try, just remember to practicepracticepractice! :] - Report As Spam
- Jesus_my_superhero - 07/23/2009
- Um.. . Well the shading is kinda cool?
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- Evil Tuna Sammmich - 07/23/2009
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Hmmm, if you're looking for tips and how you can improve on drawing on the computer; maybe my tutorial will be of some help:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/journal.php?mode=view&post_id=28665351&u=19170219 - Report As Spam
- fhdsku888 - 07/23/2009
- I NOW I NEED DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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