- by MackBowman13 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Title: Schoolgirl
- Artist: MackBowman13
- Description: like my other one but not colored (this ones better)
- Date: 08/04/2009
- Tags: schoolgirl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Delirious-Duck - 04/16/2011
- looks like a guy with a wig..
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- Strawberry Cumbustion - 08/07/2009
- When drawing the hair, don't worry about the individual hairs or strands, think about the whole shape, that will make it flow better and not look like she has terrible split ends. I hope you didn't take my criticism in the wrong way, by no means am I trying to make you feel bad, or tell you to give up. Keep drawing, with enough practice you'll be great.
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- Strawberry Cumbustion - 08/07/2009
- Her shoulders are too wide, that makes her arms look too thick. I looks to me like shes not wearing a bra because her breasts loo two-dimensional. She has no hips, and the crotch is too high up. Her neck is too thick and it looks like a pedestal upon which someone put her head crookedly.
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- xPaINxOfxLoVEx - 08/05/2009
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ur on ur way := just keep working and never give up =3
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- allcatsgirl - 08/05/2009
- the face is really good...but the rest could use some work
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- tennytiger724 - 08/05/2009
- It's great, but the hair is... I don't know.
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- Monotone Rawr - 08/05/2009
- W... T... Fk...
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