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  • Title: skateing
  • Artist: Secret_lillies
  • Description: i drew this for a contest, it's a girl ice skating it's also probably my best entry so far (YAY!) i really like it but i am open to constructive (don't be cruel.) criticism. please rate and comment, check out my gallery, and go to deadly teddy bear
    http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/art-shops-and-requests/deadly-teddy-bear-art-shop-open/t.55205391/
  • Date: 01/04/2010
  • Tags: skateing
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • II j u n i a r t II - 02/06/2010
  • She looks really well done but just her clothes are a little awkward (meaning too stiff). loosen it up with curvy lines because right now, it looks like both sleeves are being pulled from her
    and her hair is stiff as well~ loosen it up like the sleeves and add value to it by separating lights and darks dramatically and last thing, work on her right foot...something there doesn't look right
    and this is a constructive criticism..meaning it has potential of becoming a better piece art than it alrea
  • O_o Kaori-chan O_o - 01/07/2010
  • I'd say 4B. And it looks a bit weird to me. Did she fall and is now lying on the ice? The face and hair are ok but kinda sketchy and her legs need a bit more work. But all in all i like it, you can improve. 3/5
  • jaq96 - 01/06/2010
  • She looks like her head fell off, where did you get the retarded idea from? Sailor Moon, an ice skater, and the headless horse man? What the fudgecakes!! >:O
  • PoisonousMoonlight - 01/05/2010
  • I don't know and the thing I am picky on this picture about is the hair it looks a bit too edgy. Her face seems odd. Oh and last thing her fingers are sort of misplaced. But any who 4/5 It is great
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