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  • Title: Anime Sketches
  • Artist: ayocca
  • Description: Some simple sketches I drew one day. Yes, I know very well that they are nowhere near neat or perfect, and I know they are somewhat unproportional. Just letting you know I'm perfectly aware. They are sketches and ONLY sketches, so excuse my messiness. ^^"
  • Date: 04/08/2010
  • Tags: anime sketches bathingsuit girls
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • chocojax - 04/08/2010
  • - Bottom: Her body seems to be tilted as well, try to shift over her hips/butt.
    - For the hair in the top right and bottom, try to make it smoother as well, it seems very stiff right now. :I
    Sorry for the two posts, lol. Hope I helped!
  • chocojax - 04/08/2010
  • Even if they’re sketches, I hope you don’t mind my attempts at critiquing them.
    - The top left seems very skinny; try to flesh-en her out a bit more. Also, try to make her shoulders wider. I haven’t really met anyone yet whose shoulders are the same width as their head.
    - Top right: She seems very slanted, try to shift her legs over, like she’s bending over a bit, to balance her out. Also, the folds seem very strange. Try to make them less stiff and try to observe folds irl.
  • Rocca Lou - 04/08/2010
  • 4 just sketches i must say they r very nice smile practice makes perfect. you do very well with the hair (one of my bad points) razz
 
 
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