- by Midnight Masia |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 04/18/2010 |
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- Title: Just a girl <3
- Artist: Midnight Masia
- Description: My very first, time-consuming, drawning of a manga(? i dont think you can even call it manga -.-) girl.
- Date: 04/18/2010
- Tags: just girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Xfire_lightX - 04/20/2010
- OMG i used to draw like that a long time ago
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- XxSuper_NekoxX - 04/20/2010
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the eyes and hair and overall head is great :3
the neck is too thin
the shoulders r a bit broad when u draw shoulders just think of a clothes hanger (it kinda comes down to a slant)
the bust is pretty good and the stomach and waist need some more curves insted of straight lines
but over all its really is nice :3
oh and about the collar bone... it doesnt go in
(i hope this helps a bit)
3/5
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- Countess Midnight - 04/19/2010
- Keep on practicing and you'll get it eventually, The neck is too thin, shoulders are too big and square and should curve slightly like a bow rather than sit straight. You shouldn't hide the hands away, It'll look a little off in the beginning when you first draw them but eventually you'll get them right.
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- xXEctoplasmicMoonRayOo - 04/18/2010
- Nice face and hair...but I'd say the shoulders are too broad, and the arms taper down too quickly. Nice job though -- you show promise
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