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- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/28/2011 |
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- Title: the hungry art
- Artist: shinku muffin
- Description: oil pastel painting... its abstract >w>
- Date: 03/28/2011
- Tags: hungry
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- shinku muffin - 03/30/2011
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k, well thanks for the tips
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- Phantom-of_Winter - 03/30/2011
- To be honest... it's looks like a careless mash of colors. The colors don't go together every well and it loses the abstract feel you wanted to have. I think the problem is you didn't mix them well (and the coloring was done poorly). I think you should use a different material (colored pencils are a good option) and try again. I would also suggest not having so much negative space. Try to add something or cut away at the extra space. Overall, I think you could have done better. 1/5
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