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  • Cordula Gallo
  • Title: Cordula Gallo
  • Artist: TearsofBlood
  • Description: This is a new character - Cordula the Unlimited Barrel Alchemist.

    I hate drawing chains so much after doing this pic.

    (c)Cordula Gallo
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  • Date: 06/19/2011
  • Tags: cordula gallo
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • TearsofBlood - 06/21/2011
  • I see what you mean, I'll try to keep that in mind.

    You probably either saw this on Sheezyart or deviantart, that's where I post my work mostly.
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
  • -continued 2-
    should be some movement (especially with the cloth behind the legs). Overall, I think this is a pretty good piece. There are just some things that were awkwardly drawn. Keep up the good work.
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
  • -continued-
    breasts looks like it's positioned the wrong way. I do realize that one of the female breast is... well... (awkward wording warning) heavier-looking than the other, but I feel it should be positioned a little like the other breast (but not too much). Thirdly, that one leg that is pressed against the crotch... I think that leg should be more exposed. If someone would to jump, I wouldn't think the leg would be so close to the crotch that it would be touching. Finally, I think there
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
  • I think I've seen this on a different website... hmm...
    Well, anyway! This is an interesting character design and I also like the action in this picture (I like it how you blurred the chains to create movement; a very nice touch). Although... the body's position is a little awkward. Firstly, where did that other arm go? (unless she doesn't have another arm for some reason) If she does have that other arm, it should be more visible so that there is evidence that it's there. Secondly, one of the
 
 
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