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  • Just a little Kiss~
  • Title: Just a little Kiss~
  • Artist: thshrztztrzr
  • Description: A friend commissioned me to draw her OC and mine kissing eachother xD
    Well, it was supposed to become 2 kissing chibis.
    But... i ended up with this xD
    I'm a bit out of practice, i guess.

    And yes, i know the outlines are sketchy.
    Blame my lazyness for this.
    I'd appreciate it if you'd not judge the whole image only at the ot's.

    Also, if you vote low, have the courage and tell me at least why you do so. I can't improve if you just vote me down and running off with that.
  • Date: 10/17/2011
  • Tags: just little kiss
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • DeadlyPumpkinBread - 10/20/2011
  • I really like this, it's very cute! But the one on the left's face is a bit smushed toward the bottom of her (assuming it's female, sorry if I'm wrong!) head, making her look like she has an oversized cranium. It doesn't look like it was intentional, so that's just something to be conscious of.

    Aside from that, it's a wonderful pic. Kissing poses are hard to do, but this is nicely composed. The sketchy lineart isn't that bad, and in a way it kind of adds something to the pic overall. 4/5
 
 
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