- Title: Revenge of the Masked One
- Artist: iBarty
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Description:
His lover was taken from him,
One dark and stormy day,
Because of the misconception,
The blame was there to stay.
Swords were unsheathed for the fighting,
Furu stood by his side,
But poor Furu got in the way,
So then he slowly died.
That put the warrior in a rage,
Red mist started to form,
With all the power he could use,
The enemy was torn.
Years go by his body long gone,
Though his spirit still lives,
Crying out for the one he loved,
The love forever thrives.
~Oshimai~ - Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: japan furugasa inari sword sakura
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Lirael the Sleeper - 04/26/2009
- A bit too cluttered for my taste
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- SilverWolfCub - 04/21/2009
- Way cool! I love how all the items came together to set the scene and mood, very nice 5/5 and the poems is killer too
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- hilaroma - 04/20/2009
- Epic poem and avatar! I like how you used the Carol fog with everything else. Very nice. smile
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- iBarty - 04/19/2009
- Please read the FULL description http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/journal.php?mode=view&u=1152506 in my journal, it's SO much better than this shortened version. Stupid 500 character limit!
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- iBarty - 04/19/2009
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Also, this is my attempt at making a story fun without making a wall of text.. Yes, I realize that the last stanza where it should rhyme doesn't but I don't care. Idea was sparked from
Kitsunemaru-sama's thread at http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/gaia-guides-and-resources/inari-beads-furugasa-yama-no-tamago-translations-insight/t.42851333/ , I got permission to use information (though it wasn't really used in the end?).
All I ask is you vote fairly, give the description a chance. heart - Report As Spam
