- Title: Monochrome Doll
- Artist: Verathmia
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Description:
This is a work in progress and I'm looking for feedback; I was going for a piratey-norseland-fantasy look but it turned out more like a doll.
Could I please have some feedback on how to make it better?
Thankyou, Veraღ - Date: 02/20/2010
- Tags: monochrome verathmia
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Vivian Rosary LaStare - 02/28/2010
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this is very good. but its not really balanced that well. maybe add a bit more on the top or take a bit off the bottom. otherwise its really good. 4/5
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- Frosty Frigg - 02/28/2010
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monotonous monochrome, hmm yes it's been done a thousand times.
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- Cybernetic Virus - 02/25/2010
- Nicely done but the Demonic Lid thing. {I cannot currently remember its name.} Is slightly off putting. 4/5
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- AngelOfBlueRose - 02/25/2010
- The colors blend together though the eyepatch pops out if you looked ONLY at the face. But if you looked at the whole avatar...ummm...*searching for a better word*...*found none*...WOW.
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- lil-squid - 02/24/2010
- Ok cool, thanks =) And don't worry about the eyepatch. It is pure black because it does not need highlights, whereas the rest of the items on your outfit do need highlights or they wouldn't have any detail XP (if you look at the boots they are actually quite dark)
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- Tigzie - 02/24/2010
- very nice (:
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- Verathmia - 02/22/2010
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Her eye is hiding behind her hair >>
I'm still coming up with a story behind her x]
Owlie ~ Thankyou<3
And yeah, I couldn't find a better eyepatch then that one. I'll keep looking! - Report As Spam
