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G e n e s i s G a r c i a; ♥Fifteen. Sophmoree. NEVER<br />
really qo on heere. Talkk to Me. I DONT Bitee ,(: <br />
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its my thaaannq, to be funn& differentt ,(: - Avg. rating:
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 10/04/2008
- hi i noticed the comment summer_fall wrote on your thing here. she did the same to me. but she might be right that by you taking your story down then she did win. if i were you put it back up and say it to her.also i doubt your a bad writer.frankly i dont really like her stuff.also cute avi and i love your house 5/5
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/29/2008
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-suspect you have not read any of my work and are posting in anger.
Any truth to that?
smile Toodles! Enjoy your unsuccessful career as a writer!
PS- you took down the awful story. I win. - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/29/2008
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*eyebrow raise* Can't say you didn't deserve it. If you want to be a writer, it requires listening to critiques, not just shoving them off as "Ah! What do they know?" And since you deleted my, actually rather kind, comments, I felt it was my duty to give you a more honest set.
And- I hate to pull this out, I really do- but my story has gotten better ratings and comments than yours. Normally, this counts for very little, but you did bring it up. Also, there's only one story, which makes me- - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/25/2008
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-going to whine and b***h and angst the entire story. Welcome to MarySuedom. Your character will be shot.
Also, when someone else speaks, YOU START A NEW PARAGRAPH. I propose taking a grammar class and learning how to actually use commas.
THERE IS A FICTION SECTION, DUMBASS. As an add-on, this is NOT interesting- this is the same crap I've seen three hundred consecutive times.
This was extremely freeing to say all this. Thankfully I didn't have to be nice the second time around, huh? - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/25/2008
- Your character is a Mary Sue. It's only been one chapter, and I can already tell. She's hated by someone popular- who you do on a total, rediculous sterotype. You may think that steryotypes make things better, but in actuality they cheapen your work and make you cheesy. I KNOW your MC is going to fall in "love" (which you will likely define as "drooling, infantile obsession," wink with Rich Girl's boyfriend. Right? He'll probably be a senior and the coolest guy in the class. Your MC is probably-
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/25/2008
- Ha ha! Silly me. Clearly, when you wanted to know what people thought of your work, what you REALLY meant was "Tell me how awesome I am!" I should have understood this. Well, no matter- you asked for critiques and I'm going to give them to you- again. Then I am going to post them on your gallery page to make sure you can't delete them. It's quite a lot of work, but trust me, you're worth it. It's also nice that I no longer must worry about being mean. Thank you for freeing me up like this.
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