Searching for a life

• Artist: Nyochu
• Description: this description is based on searching for something special someone always wanted
• Date: 10/21/2008
• Tags: searching life

I have been searching for something
Far over hills but could not find that thing sad

I looked through my heart
And found it was empty

I asked god for that thing
But there was no answer mad

I cried all day cry
But no one cared

I bang my head hard on the wall
Only pain was left

I stared at the sky the whole day stare
Only a bird flu across my eyes

I think its time i tell the thing i have been searching for a day

I have been searching for a family
That would love me heart

I have beeen searching for a house
To live in

I have been searching for a friend
Who speaks with me everyday neutral

And finally i have been searching for world
That i belong

I am sure that one day i will find what i want

Comments

[The Fox Tamer]

This is a really good poem. Good luck.

[milandude]

Really Good Poem. Less Emoticons. POETRY SECTION!!!!!!

[Callisthea Cross]

What I find here was rather a longing for something...and it was like an act of frustration. But, I guess you should put more emotion to this or use other words, and not too many emoticons...and I believe this goes to the poetry section...^^

[Koydith Ametrya]

Sorry, but nobody will take you seriously if you use emoticons in your writings.

[Asaoko]

Should be in a poet section...