dark ice inside

• Artist: hazuinf
• Description: I decided to write some overly 'emo' writing in science class today, cos I was bored and I'm quite good at writing sad stuff. I'm not stereotyping 'emos', nor am I not trying to offend/insult 'emos'. I admit its on the extreme side of 'emo', but it's meant that way. Please don't take offense people. rate/comment. Thank you.
• Date: 05/20/2009
• Tags: pain sadness depression macabre sinister

Dark ice inside, biting at his heart. Filling him and making him hollow. Emptying him into himself. The fault of others, but he's to blame. He walks alone, surrounded on all sides. Alone in the fullest room, he hides in plain view, creeping away inside himself. They don't know who he is, but they have already ruined him. Darkness spreading from his touch, he seems to choose to touch always those who don't deserve the pain. The noose falls, his life slips. His blood drips, the ice tightens. Cold claims him, he now knows kindness.

Comments

[xXAlice RockzXx]

this is really good.....way better than my writing. ya, i suck. but u dnt. u should keep writing, its awesome. great job.

[hazuinf]

Thanks! I honestly didn't even think about writing about it. I doodled a couple of lines, and then just decided to bulk them up a little bit. :]
Gracias

[Tenacious Thomas]

I thought this was going to be emo...........but it was kickass instead!

[hazuinf]

ok? thanks. smile

[chris Phame]

ok ok