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The boy fell asleep slowly. Eyes swollen from crying. His father has left again, off to his ship again. Drunk, again. The boy had been beaten, again.
The high mountains of Japan in the background, fuzzy and smoothed by fog. The boys dream slowly was filled with ships that he thought his father commanded. Their flags flapped in the wind that wasn’t there. The sea mist splashed against the sides but the ships were not wet. The boy watched behind his eyelids to see the magnificent ships rise into the air, untouched by gravity.
Each ship had a story. Of hero’s, pirates treasure, of mutiny.
The ships were rocked by memories and pain, lulling the boy back into his soft bed.
- by AmayaUta12 |
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- | Submitted on 08/24/2010 |
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- Title: A Little Boy's Dream
- Artist: AmayaUta12
- Description: This is my first posting, so please don't b super mean. But i would love some feed back, thanks!
- Date: 08/24/2010
- Tags: little boys dream
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sally Spearow - 08/24/2010
- Wow. You hardly used any words ( compared to some of the things I had to write for school) But the words you used made such a clear image in my head. Awesome.5/5
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- Matthew_Von_Haven - 08/24/2010
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omg that is good 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,0005
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