under a tree

• Artist: iimN0th1n
• Description: why
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: under tree

I walk around trees
wondering why i must cry
then I sit and die

Comments

[adorable a s i a n]

Haiku, traditional Japanese ones at least, usually have some sort of allusion to a season.
Other than that, it's unique.

[botdfcat]

i liked your haiku

[boredbuthappy]

that is sad but at least u tried i know a lot of ppl who think poetry is for sissies

[Lady Acire]

uh ok..

[ValiantFlame]

Too short and not very powerful...

[yats34]

nice, but a little on the emo side. try writing about happiness or something. all the stuff i read on here is dark and depressing. laugh a little, will ya??

[DLneostarG]

u can read mine if u want 2. Spread the Word ok??