dark blood

• Artist: infinityflames-of-blood12
• Description: its probably my favorit peice ive done yet
  its for people who are into vampires and dark things u couldget chills from it
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: vampire

you crave it
you want it
you see it
you smell it
you taste it
its the one thing your scared to admit you love
its the dark thick watery red substince you see
when you shove past someone on your way home
its blood


who or rather what have you become
you don't recognize your own reflection
your girlfriend's lying on the bed
blood stained dyeing
or is she just ben given a new life??
you dont know


what have you done
you decide to run and run and run
but why its goten you nowhere so far
you look at your blood stained hands
and you scream and scream
you lean against the wall and slowly slide down
you wash the blood off your body in a nearby lake
and decide to continue life as it was
so you go home
and place all that has happened behind you
but deep inside you want the other life that awaits you
you drop the plate you were washing in shock of realisation

Comments

[Suffocating Lace]

I suggest you edit & revise before submitting.

Other than that, its alright.

[bonnie505]

??the message was very clear .i wish the words were rearranged

[Akeioni]

Kinda Creepy.
Though it reminds me of the Twilight Saga. xD

Pretty good.

[Hurricane Bleeds]

it was good but there were a few mispelled words...