Construction

• Artist: La Cerise Noire
• Description: inspired by the constuction outside my house
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: construction

The gentle hum of machinery,
Rumbling through the humid air.

The soft buzz of a bee,
as it flies near the rubbish.

The creak of the tires,
As they struggle out of the pothole.

Destroying and remaking,
The paths that we walk.

Comments

[mexicantacos2003]

shallow is as shallow does?? girl below me must have heard that one


anyway very descriptive and cryptic at the same time
it answers questions no one asks and creates questions no one answers
but that is the good part


and it is literally one of the easiest to read
not so harsh on the eyes
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[Ellyion-sama]

I dunno what your talking about guy below me but zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz its short but sounds calm!! luuuuuvv it!!!!!!!

[xeroabyss]

Kinda paints the scene nicely.
It's quite simplistic in it's writting, but much of life is just the same smile