WHY

• Artist: Awesome_Red_Fox
• Description: a girl who is saying she lost everything
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: lonelygirllosteverything

daddy i met this guy he said he loved me but i dont kno if its true then today he said he hated me daddy why does my heart hurt why does it feel like its wounded why daddy i feel like im about to cry why is that daddy i feel so sad like no one cares i feel like dieing daddy can you here me i kno you dont want me to cry but i lost you mommy and my love why does my heart hurt i wish i could be there with you in heaven i keep the light on just in case you come home and kiss me goodnight i love you so much maybe one day i can visit you in heaven ok? why does my heart hurt ive never known love y why dont i kno kno will tell me im all alone kids make fun of me i miss you daddy is it true your not comeing home i miss you daddy i love you so much

Comments

[indiangirl2008]

it's really good smile but i think you should check your grammer, and puncuation..

[wallerrob]

its ok to a degree, but you need more puncuation and your spelling needs to be looked over.

[kagome_4ever126]

It's good but i think you could've put some more work into it. =/

[mkjhfd]

its fantastic
but u could add some pontuation....

[Feareaper]

thats not a poem..its just writing
and your spelling sucks

[D4rkFir3L0v3]

So bored =[