Beware Savior

• Artist: Sakura lady of death
• Description: This poem illustrates the precursor of Jack's demise. The "Troubled teens", are the neighbor hood bullies, and the "innocent ones" in this case are Jack's friends. In the story, Jack defends them by fighting with the bullies...however, death is his shadow on this fateful day.
  
  If you want to know more about my story LoTS, you can see my earlier journal entries for that. :3
  Hope you like it. :3
• Date: 09/04/2008
• Tags: story jack death fight night

Smoke rained down from the sky
As though the tears of a goddess ran dry..
leaving behind emptiness and woe
to waft about the streets below..

Troubled teens left and right
Heartfelt citizens in their parent's sight
but out on the road they show the truth
the ugly side that thrives in the night!

Look out, look out!
Innocent ones on the go..
Look out! There you shouldn't go!
Don't go! Don't go!

Someone help! Help these souls unaware
Come forth savior, if you dare...
but beware, beware savior, beware!
These bad souls will not run so soon!

Innocent ones..or savior...one will meet their doom!

Comments

[scitama]

I totally got the message that you wrote in your description about 'troubled teens'. Nicely written smile