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When I first met you,
I hated you.
We hated each other.
I never thought that would change.
My heart would beat faster and I would feel anxiety around you.
I thought my hatred caused this anxiety...
People said we were perfect together.
I denied it.
Months after I realized I was being immature.
We both were.
We befriended each other at last.
It was then i realized,
I loved you.
I hated you because you always did things that worried me,
Or sometimes treated me differently and lectured me.
No one else did that to me and i reacted badly.
My anxiety was because I was afraid of seeing you with her...
My friend,
.... Your girlfriend.
After you both broke up,
I thought it was my chance to confess to you,
But you had shut your heart,
It was frozen cold.
My heart turned cold just as yours.
My feelings towards you never changed though.
Months pass by and you speak to me again.
I reply dryly to everything you say.
You touched my face,
I felt nothing.
You spent every moment possible by my side,
I felt nothing.
You embraced me tightly,
I embraced you also,
But still feeling empty inside...
We both let go.
When I look into your eyes,
And you look into mine,
You speak to me,
As softly as possible.
And I respond.
But then there will be a silence,
That neither of us can break.
It doesnt hold a feeling of love or affection.
Instead it holds emptiness.
You told me one day,
That you knew everything about me.
And that I was the only one that knew everything about you.
I disagreed.
You knew nothing about me.
You only thought you did.
I spoke those words with hatred..
And your responce was filled with frustration.
You seemed upset to me,
But if I opened my eyes,
I would have realized you were hurt.
Now I am alone,
In my room.
You in yours.
I rethink our whole story,
From when we met til now.
Tears slid down my face.
Tears of sadness,
Tears of confusion and frustration.
Because I realize,
If I would have opened my eyes,
And opened up my heart,
I would have noticed,
You loved me.
Our love is a complicated one.
Our ways of acting are what create a barrier between us.
Our love is like magnets,
We attract each other,
But occasionally push each other apart.
Is our love impossible?
No it isnt.
It will only be until the day we both open up,
And let our emotions out...
- by Deadstar x Assembly |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: love like magnets
- Artist: Deadstar x Assembly
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Description:
just another free verse poem that i wrote.
my inspiration came from my experiences with a guy i used to like and still like now.....
our emotions still keep us both somewhat distant but we're both starting to learn how to get past this problem.. <3 - Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: love like magnets heartbreak emotion
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Comments (3 Comments)
- original288 - 06/18/2009
- awww i love this poem. sounds like a drama, haha smile
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- musicsevenfold - 09/14/2008
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I love this poem.
I made one too
very similar
Very good though. - Report As Spam
- Deadstar x Assembly - 09/14/2008
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i must admit i wrote a lot for a poem XD
but regardless of that please judge this poem fairly - Report As Spam