darkness

• Artist: celtic_alanah
• Description: one of my new poems hope you like
• Date: 10/20/2008
• Tags: darkness dark wolf silence sorrow

Darkness surrounds me,
open your eyes to look an' see.
silence consumes me as i walk.
Open your ears and i may talk.
No sound is heard as i fade away,
never come this way.
shadows follow as i crawl,
the wolf on the hill will howl,
a mournful sound,
i rest upon the cold ground.

Comments

[NekoBaby1]

4/5. mayb im readin it wrong but sum of the lines dont flow. sorry

[freaky kitty1]

that's quite depressing....it almost made me cry....i've felt like that before....it suks!!! it's absolutely horrible! it's like u have nowhere to go but to yourself.....then u feel like ur going to go crazy or something!! but i got over it.....amazing friends....they helped me soooo much! now i'm happy and hyper! smile lol

[silentwolf123]

Aye it short but it gives the point of the poem and it nice.

[chimamire barra]

nice and short