Should I care?

• Artist: DiexToxSurvive
• Description: umm...explicit. plz don't judge and no harsh comments (i have enough of those to last an immortal lifetime)
• Date: 10/28/2008
• Tags: should care

Should I even care anymore?
I'm already dying,
On the bathroom floor.
The blood that once was rushing,
Through my veins,
Is now spilling,
From my wrists.
Do you realize this isn't a game
Anymore, is it?
This is serious, this is real.
But you're not even curious,
About how I feel.
So, I'm bleeding,
But it's not bothering me.
It's the sorrow inside,
That's killing me.
It's the lack of attention,
And love that I need.
That's making me sick,
That's making me do all of this...

Comments

[Tracker Ninja]

Suicide over,

"It's the lack of attention,
And love that I need" ??

[DasSnoot]

It is uhh... Interesting. It made me want to be sad. As for rythm, i found some, but in a freestyle form. Even though its a bit too emo for my taste. Its nice ^^.

[Lex2442]

it's not good.....it's well.....TERIFFIC!!!!!!

[Snailes]

Made me frown. The rhythm was kind of bad, too be honest, but the poem was more than the sum of it parts. Also, don't worry about people judging you, writing is a way of coping. Maybe you should try to write a poem like this about how you feel whenever you get the urge to do, you know, what you talked about in this poem.

[i r JEDI]

Amazing. smile

[AH-Closed]

I hope you are feeling better now than you were then smile
and you should care IMO. There are people that care about you but I have noticed that lots of people that are in messes like I guess you are in seem to gloss over that and fail to realize that there are people who would mourn their death. Keep hoping and don't let anyone crush you into thinking you are worthless smile for you are not smile