"The Earth"

• Artist: iResell
• Description: A poem I wrote..I appreciate comments...I would love constructive criticism also ...to help with my future poems!
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: earth

The Earth has allowed us to live our lives
Now it watches displeased, and cries
It blows each wind crying out
Hoping we'll hear it's subtle shout

All the things we took for granted
Cutting trees we should have planted
The infinite thought of our resources
Now is ending in many courses

Now our world is sinking down
Slipping under, yet refusing to drown
Soon the water will atop earths head
We will finally see what we've done

And why we are dead.

Comments

[OchitaFuyu]

he-he i admire your concern or the world to day. i to worry, and im sick of it, so unclean so impure! but ill manage.....

[zomgMARISSA]

Ah-ma-zing. This is very true.

[scalpel_pleasex]

That was extremily good, 5/5

[XM The SpeedRunner]

Now this is a good poem! Not only good, but true! We always seem to be taking advantage of what Earth has in store. That also makes me wonder what will we be thinking when that certain day comes, too...

[Kyonshi Tenshi]

Ah.. so true. So true, too bad no one pays attention huh? I wonder when people will realize the earth is dying... 4/5.

[Maryjustianna]

so true so true

[LuckieStar]

oh my gosh that is so awesome!!