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Have you ever felt you're heart is broken?
The shards cant seem to find their place,
The tears are streaming down you're face,
Have you ever stopped to think a miniute,
What I will do when you are gone,
Will I be steady or will my world fall down,
Now my life is clear,
Noise isnt all that you can hear,
My heart stops beating when I,
See you're smile,
look into you're eyes!
Now that you're listening to me,
Friends is less than we should be,
My heart stops beating when I,
See you're smile,
Look into you're eyes!
And maybe,
If you cant stay to long,
Then maybe,
You're already gone!
And maybe,
As our time goes on,
Then maybe,
You're face will fade on!
I said ill,
Make the promises,
Were alwayse making up!
Break those promises,
Were alwayse breaking up!
ALL THIS TIME WERE breaking up,
I said ill,
Take the world away,
And leave a spot for you!
Take the world away,
And give it all to you!
ALL THIS TIME WERE making up
So Maybe,
Next time you come along,
Then youll know,
ill already be gone....
- Title: unknown (thats not the title)
- Artist: Jenna894
- Description: me and my friends wanted to start and band and sence i can only play electric gutair and som1 els is playing that i defaulted to singer, and now i have to come up with songs and im horrible at that so PLEASE constructive critisizm! and if u want to some opinions for the title :cute:
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: makeup breakup lyrics song
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iluvpolkadots - 11/30/2008
- ... Im not sure what to tell you..there are a lot of things wrong with it..and...well...it really doesnt make any sense. You're skipping around with your topics. Oh and you used YOU'RE instead of YOUR like it supposed to be. Please take better care in the future.
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- chanson des fleurs - 11/29/2008
- Since you commented on my poem and requested me to look at your arena poems, I did. This poem is very good. :]
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- xem the friut - 11/29/2008
- omg...the ultimate tittle for your song my friend...redy for it........."the never ending love story" it might suck but dont make fun of me XD
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- vampiregirl135 - 11/29/2008
- this is so great! i think u really have songwriting talent!
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