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Oh, oh, it hurts again,
Maybe I'll get used to it.
Fate pierced my soul,
Will I ever recover?
I woke up, it was dawn,
And the church bells were ringing.
- by SeizureProcedure182 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Oh it Hurts
- Artist: SeizureProcedure182
- Description: hiro san posted this!!!!!!
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: hurts
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- xXsilverxsilenceXx - 11/30/2008
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i agree with Nikki4815, but it is pretty good. my friend
ich heisse Winter has submitted one called "Losses" would you look at it? - Report As Spam
- Nikki4815 - 11/30/2008
- I like it, but I do think you should add more and enter it again later. But what you have is good, so 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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