I know I'm different

• Artist: Abbygail0810
• Description: Read the poem then you'll understand ^^
  
  
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: know different

I know I’m different from the other girls you have dated
That is why I said I have the bigger advantage
I’m full of surprises and you don’t know when I’ll strike
You better be on your best guard or you can take a hike

I know I’m different and you can’t handle me
It is weird because this is my first time
My sisters always tell me ‘Show ‘em who’s the boss’
So, I can act up if I want to and it will be your loss

I know I’m different; I even barely keep up with myself
Think of it as a test, you either pass or you fail
Please, stop all you drama and lies to everyone else
Are you going to be a man or you just going to bail?

I know I can be a loathsome but you can’t help if I’m different
Yes, it is true I do love you with an unusual way to show my affection
Believe me, it wasn’t supposed to go down this way
And when you said you love me too, I went crazy

It’s a happy ending but will it ever last?
Don’t worry; ‘cause I'll be here making sure it does

Comments

[cooll666725]

XD Very good grammar and rhythm. It also makes me think of my g/f, but only because her and I have some very odd ways of showing we love each other (biting, clawing, smacking, tussling on the floor, tackling each other, and more things that are less acceptable by society).

[Kibroth]

...Someone knows how to use spell check. *slow clap*
The question is, do you actually believe all that stuff you wrote in there?
This is the first poem I've read on Gaia that, despite being technically correct and passably well written, I am rating almost entirely based on content.
-K

[Klaora]

O.O What is this? A poem with correct spelling, punctuation, and it even rhymes?! This boggles my mind!
Overall composition is very nice. A few of them seemed like forced rhymes, but that's fine. :3 We all get those sometimes.
You've put my faith back into this category, thank you!

[Smosh Productions]

nice. 5/5.

[greentiivanilla]

very nice