Alas my Love

• Artist: intoxicatingDestruction
• Description: This is my homework response to a poem from real long ago. my teacher said I was roo nice, but itsn't good that people don't have to break someones heart brutally like the others. I am nice, deal with it Teacher. Please tell me how you all like it
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: alas love

I’ve heard your plea,
How much you love me.
Alas it is too much,
I can’t take the pressure of such.


You’re sweet like candy,
But my heart is fragile and sandy.
You deserve better then me,
For you are like the graceful sea.


Goodbye, I say, I must leave,
I must let my heart get its relieve.
It won’t be hard, I fear,
It might break your heart, but not a single fallin’ tear.


I will live the long eternity of my life,
You can do nothing for me like the blunt end of a knife.
I will only remember you when the sky falls down,
I can live without you if I stay on my ground.

Comments

[intoxicatingDestruction]

well i like my teacher she just doesn't understand me at all

[Unfound Dreams]

I think its good, and that some teachers are real mean and scary. I got up in lit class to put away my book, adn she started screaming at me to bring it back. I was so ticked, and I was like "Gaud, why do you hate so much? Just mind your own businesss' Garsh, I hate my lit teacher. She is such a fitch.