impossible

• Artist: midnight roamer7
• Description: this is about a girl liking a vampire who thinks loving him is...well... impossible
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: impossible vampires

i look through his eyes
not caring what he is
he is mine and i am his

i dont care if
he wishes to kill me
he can have me

i see the agony
in his eyes
i know what hes thinking
and my heart slowly dies

"impossible"
he wispers barely audable for me to hear
"no"
i wisper back in his ear

the pain tears me from inside
but i wont let it show
if he doesnt want me
then he can go

he hurries out the window
as if he doesnt care
i look at him leaving
this is more than i can bear

love shouldnt be impossible
why must it be for me?
i know he feels the same way
i know he loves me

Comments

[SUNTEKE]

better than my vamp one

[midnight roamer7]

ummmm
thnx?

[HUMIDIFIER]

vampires are over done and the mention of vampires now draws audible groans from me. there are mistakes with the conventions of written English in this poem that show a lack of effort and interest in your own poem. there is nothing palpable to feel in this very cliche and superficial piece.

[midnight roamer7]

thnx 4 the coments
and sry if their similar to twilight

[ii-Blu3 Dayz-ii]

this is very amazing!!! and thanx for your comment and ur rate on my poem!! 10/5

[xXxFried-CheesecakexXx]

Well, I completely agree with Nikki4815 about the vampire thing. If it was about something more original, then it would be better. So I think I'll give it a four, too.

[Nikki4815]

it's nice, but I'm sick of all the people doing vamp love. Twilight was the first one, (and I loved twilight) but we don't need more! There is a point when it gets to be too much. Besides that minor detail, this is prob the best of the dumb vamp things I've seen, so I give you a four. Rate back? Check out my gallery.