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Shining Metal--
Heart is pounding
Pulse is racing
Head is throbbing
Eyes are tracing
Multiple stars overruling the sky
The moon shines bright
Glowing with pride
She thinks of ways to end this night
Wondering how she should go
With a bullet
With a knife
So many ways to end this life
She remembers back to
A young girl with no cares
Small and innocent
With long dark hair
But now she stares
At the knife before her
Wondering if she could do this
Wondering if anyone would care
The slender long piece of metal
Glimmers in the dark night
Tempting her to play
Wanting to seize more lives
But tonight she couldn’t bare it
It was too much
To fast
Not another death
In this short amount of time
And as she drew a final breath
She rested her head on a pillow
And thought of what would happen
Next time
- by dark_beauty229 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/02/2009 |
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- Title: Shining Metal
- Artist: dark_beauty229
- Description: just a little poem i wrote one day. tell me wat u think
- Date: 03/02/2009
- Tags: shining metal
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Comments (2 Comments)
- _.Angel.Aflame._ - 01/16/2014
- Deliciously morbid, I love it! You painted a beautiful portrait with only words, and that's not easy.
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- kikioblack - 03/03/2009
- I like how it's put together, in a way when reading it, it has a fast pace. I like it, reminds me of people I know.
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