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Don’t hold me back
I’ve got to face the fact
That we aren’t meant to be
If only I could see
My eyes are closed
Feeling blind
Stuck in a serious bind
The clouds are gone
A poem nothing like a song
I need to say how I feel inside
But can’t find the words to speak
If you want to hear what is true
Then don’t hold me back
I love you
- by xI-iPanda-Ix |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: Don't Hold Me Back
- Artist: xI-iPanda-Ix
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- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: dont hold back
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lolkittyXD - 05/02/2009
- i loved it so good added it to my favs
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- Sunafire - 03/23/2009
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To me this says 'We arn't right for each other, but I still love you."
And it's a feeling lots of us get smile
I love the rhyming and the structure in this... it's really good.
Some good metaphors too!
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