The Eternal Flame

• Artist: sweetgirl101209
• Description: Just a simple love poem I came across in my folder,let me know what you think!
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: eternal flame love forever

The eternal flame burns on and on
Though cold harsh winds may blow,it burns on and on
Heavy rains may fall upon it but it still burns on and on
Like the eternal flame,my love for you never goes out
It simply burns on and on
Forever.

Comments

[Danna Amamus]

I think you could even cut out the word 'forever' on the last line and just let it end with 'on and on'. The repetition of those words on each line gives the feeling of 'forever' you don't need to spell it out. ^_^ But, good job!