Dead

• Artist: xXmusic_luv3rXx
• Description: I wrote this poem not to long ago, and that is exactly how I feel right now. It seems like no one cares no matter who I tell no one will help me...
• Date: 04/27/2009
• Tags: dead xxmusicluv3rxx alone suicide

Dead

She sits in a locked room
With pen and paper
Writing a goodbye note
She finishes the note
And folds it up
She lays it on the table
Then picks up a rusty razor
And cuts her arm
There is a deep cut
That just keeps on bleeding
And just won’t stop
The room begins to spin
Her emotions in a tangle
And she is so confused
Everything starts to get blurry
As she falls to the ground crying
Suddenly all the pain goes away
And she is gone
Gone forever
She was a daughter
Hiding her depression
A sister
Trying to make a good impression
She was the girl
Trying to get you to care and listen
But you thought it was nothing
Now look where she ended up

Comments

[Femurie]

And friend and I have actually gone through depression, athough she was deeper in it than I. People will listen, you just have to find the right people. I was the right person my friend, so I ended up pulling her out, and some of her other friends helped. There is a person who will listen, you just need to find them.

[CherryFlavoredDeodorant]

con.) t in the grave yard.

Remember the Yo Gabba Gabba song!

Keep trying! Keep trying,
Don't give up (don't stop) Never give up!
Don't stop, don't give up
don't stop don't give up!

I am also one of those people who care. XoXoXo :d (P.S. Put that on your face and in your mind mor3 often!!!!!) biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin D biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin

[CherryFlavoredDeodorant]

That is very deep. My sister used to feel like that. But she got better. You can't keep yourself wrapped up in depression all the time. Sometimes, you just gotta let go. And it does hurt, a lot. But once you get over it, it'll fell like that never happened. Just like Stoner Shriek said:
"...the only way to prove that is by remaining alive to provide the proof..."Don't give up!!!! Because if you end your life now, that means that you're a quitter. Hurting yourself won't get anywhere in life bu

[Stoner Shriek]

...(continued) it flowed nicely and I certainly hope to hear more from you, so don't leave us yet!

~Stoner Shriek~

[Stoner Shriek]

The whole feel of it seems to signify that the suicide was mainly for revenge purposes, in an attempt to make her family feel guilty. A dreary yet interesting read. If this is how you truly feel, believe me there are plenty of those who care. Your existence is not meaningless, but of course the only way to prove that is by remaining alive to provide the proof. I can completely understand your perspective however, I've been through this myself. As far as the poem goes

[OMGaara13]

wow, very deep. I completely understand where your coming from

[RisexWithxthexDead]

Touching. But believe me there are people out there who care. I know because I'm one of those people :3 there is also the "nine line" call them it's anonymous it's free :] if ur interested pm me :]