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In the darkness
There will always be a small light to guide you
In the pits of death
There will always be a small bit of life that grows
So please don’t give up on your hope
That is still there to grow and guide you
We will be waiting for you there
Hold out your hand
- Title: words of strength
- Artist: Valoralin
- Description: Small poem with a big meaning. Tell me what u think. ^_^
- Date: 05/04/2009
- Tags: words strength
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Comments (5 Comments)
- dory2o2 - 08/17/2009
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wow...I am rendered speechless!
Good Job!
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- JUGGERNAUT_VampireofFood - 08/14/2009
- this is really good! like you said a small poem with alot of meaning, alot of people do give up when they are in the "dark" but they shouldnt and thats what you are saying so wonderfully here ^_^
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- xIVooDooIx - 07/17/2009
- spoken like a true artist, search me plz and comment, ill spread the love
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- Wunderful_Coffee_Cup - 06/26/2009
- keep it up very good
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- tjenator - 05/07/2009
- holy @#$!@#$%$@@#**!@#$@!$!$with cheese! this rocks! Dudet, nice poem writing.keep it up, and you'll be famous.
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