Blood Rose

• Artist: demon_of_cruelty
• Description: i made this poem one day (actually it took 3 days) when almost all the things happened to me. the words had just kinda spilled out of meh.
• Date: 05/21/2009
• Tags: blood rose

He walks on the path on what some would say
The worst possible day
His girlfriend was caught cheating
His brother took a big beating
His dog ran away
And has been gone for more than a day
The book of his life is starting to close
As he stumbles upon his first blood rose

As he thinks about ending it
Yet oddly finds a mitt
The book of his life is almost at a close
For inside the mitt is his second blood rose

He walks on the path
And decides to do the math
One more blood rose it’s over
Holding his pocketknife he falls
It piercing his heart
The book of his life is at a close
For in front of him lay the final blood rose

Comments

[Autumn Angel 13]

very good.!! 5/5

[Aikou Ikari]

Wow. Very nice. Advice, though, I agree with Maica. It doesn't need to ryhme to be a great poem, but I enjoyed it. 4/5

[awai mitsukai]

luv it

[maica5]

luv it its awesome if im in da mood it will take me 2 seconds to write this lolz but 1 tip hunz you dont need rhymes to write a great poem cuz all u want is to make a great chemistry of words to explain how you truly feel