You are Not Unique

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: I wrote this a few Weeks ago, I dug it up and posted it (This is in no way to be relatd to any friends of mine, at the time of writing this... I felt unloved and only seeing the idiots of men get the girls that could do so much better) Hope you like it... Please comment, tell me the truth, and dont comlain about the content if you dissagree... if you critisize anything let it be the poetry!
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: unique

You are not unique. . .
. . .your just like everyone else. . .
. . .except stupid. . .
perverse. . .
. . .violent. . .
. . .cursed. . .

YOU ARE NOT,

Unknowing and naive.
Not easy to deceive.
In a state of belief.
Quitting something in favor of a new eve.
Unwilling to just up and leave.
Eternally willing to overachieve.

YOU ARE AN,

Over the top, but at a pitiful height.
Undeserving in all that you do, not even with your own might.
Too radical to be controlled, like a blinding light.
Careless about your foes, always in a fight.
Always uptight.
Spilling your guts in this crap that you write.
Trying once more to slip away into the night.

. . . an undeserving mess.
. . . out of all, the less.

. . . now let the others not die . . .
. . . just accept your fate without asking why.

... because you're not unique ...
... he is ...
... and that's why ...
... she loves him.

Comments

[1so_so11rry_ari11]

....wow.... speechless but i do have to say i agree with mostly all... Well I can't really totally agree with your description because some girls (most) annoy the crap out of me and yea they can do better but the way they approach guys are in whorish manner and the guys who take girls for their personality and looks don't deserve a whore sooooo yea.... i think this only makes sense in my mind xD but yea

[Xxhells bloodxX]

thnx for makin my poems look like sh!t -_-

oh but ur poem is really good

[Buttercup Veela]

oh ok. lol, i forgot what i was talking about anyway.

[290DarkStars]

ummmmm what? I wrote this at school... you don't know who I wrote this too... because it is dedicated to all of the freaking idiot girls that I have had to watch in the past 15 years of my life.

[Buttercup Veela]

am i the only one who knows y and to who u wrote this?

[290DarkStars]

^^ ty

[Daddy Got This Account]

thats good dark. i like it. ^^ very good expression of the topic of girls dating the guys and how- well, yeah. ^^ ill just say its great and give you a 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/ 5 and be on my way to look at more of your poetry. ^^