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If you want me,
you can have me.
I won't struggle!
You said you loved me,
and i believed you.
I can not suffer!
Inside a fire is burning!
Your love fuels its flame!
This fire will burn forever!
I feel a pain inside of me.
It is growing with every second.
I will not struggle!
It will not go away.
It is constantly haunting me.
I can not suffer!
It has grown out of control!
It has taken me over!
I'm getting weaker, and now you help me!
I lived a lie!
My hate burns now!
I will not......
- by deth_fan01 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/29/2009 |
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- Title: Love-induced Heart Attack
- Artist: deth_fan01
- Description: These are lyrics i wrote for my band, Suicidal Remedy. I hope you like them. plz comment
- Date: 06/29/2009
- Tags: loveinduced heartattack
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ProfessorKC - 09/21/2009
- Actually, I'd have to disagree with the flow even, but agree with Tamasha. The "meter" that is common in most songs to make them sound as if they flow with the music is the same as meter in poetry. This fails to have any set meter and would sound as if it was forced into a beat because of it making it awkward. Besides that, the content looks as if it was written by someone on xanex. Is this person helping or hurting or both? Make up your mind for us please?
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- random_guy09 - 07/05/2009
- Nice bro.....
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- Tamasha_Toko - 07/02/2009
- Sorry It is great format and everything and flows nice, but i'm going to have to give it a low rating because of the creativity put into it. Seems like i've heard these same words used the same way too many times before in many poems and song lyrics.
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- Darkus Darkness - 07/01/2009
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Very Nice...
Very Awesome..
Bravo...! 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Nylon Steelsen - 07/01/2009
- me like =3 5/5
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- iCandiMandi - 06/30/2009
- Heyyy bro this is realllyy cool PEOPLE COMMENT THIS DAMN TALENT GUYYY!!!!I
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