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you have both torn my heart in two,
one piece is with him, one piece is with you,
all that's left is crumbs and dust,
but you won't worry, now that i must,
find my soul, which happens to be,
lost in fear for all eternity.
- by vollianter |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/02/2009 |
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- Title: torn
- Artist: vollianter
- Description: i wrote this at a time in my life when my parents wanted me to decide who to live with...and well...this was the easiest way to get my emotions out.
- Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: torn
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Comments (7 Comments)
- queen siva - 08/27/2010
- i really love it..but i love the inspiration more. true poetry is art from within. thats what i love about this. sorry about your parents. 5/5
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- predestined_destinii - 01/31/2010
- not that great it should be a little longer and you could have used better vocabulary and not such corny rhyming
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- Inuyasharoo - 07/05/2009
- Yo, its cool
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- Ironic Cullen - 07/05/2009
- I love this poem. Keep up the good work.
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- oX-silent-rose-Xo - 07/02/2009
- I agree with shiaris-! this is one of the bestest best piece of work I've seen in ages! awesome job! there's rhythm and rhyme! it's very expressive and i like the choice of words. I love it..
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- shiaris - 07/02/2009
- That is the best piece of work i've seen in ages. Great work!
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