Is there something more?

• Artist: Selfless Knight
• Description: I hope everyone likes it, it's my first try. A sort of depressing poem that I just wrote off the top of my head.
• Date: 07/04/2009
• Tags: there something more

I started to slip so I reached out my hand
to you
and you just smiled and let me fall

As I descend I realize
what had been right in front of me the whole time
I see you for what you really are

I thought I had a friend
but you just used me
and let me go

So now I'm stuck down here
and as I look towards the sky
I see you still are standing

And laughing at the top

Comments

[Selfless Knight]

I need more ratings.

[Selfless Knight]

thank you. smile

[smiley peyton]

wow i really like this. this was probably one of my favorite things tht ive read tht was so good....i like =]

[iiGummi_Bears]

i like