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• Artist: intoxicatingDestruction
• Description: I made this when we started poetry in my class, my class table loves my poetry so I started to put up in here. I get some negative feedback though. Oh well. Here's the first poem I made during class after my teacher said it takes weeks to write. Time: Less then an hour.Well then, enjoy! Please please please comment and pm if you wish to "teach me" in the ways of my failure. There is no way to do poetry wrong!
• Date: 07/12/2009
• Tags: title sorry

I don't know you.
I don't need you.

I love you.
I can't leave you.

I can walk away from you.
I can forget all of you.

I must see you.
I have to know you.

I despise you.
I can't stand you.

I understand you.
I will fight for you.

Never will I care for you.

Forever will i wait for you.

Comments

[koigirl]

nice smile

[intoxicatingDestruction]

Thank you. Just just thank you.

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

To the contrary, there are many ways to do poetry wrong D: however you seem to be in the right, so no worries xD This poem here is interesting, it shows a very basic conflict which most people can relate to, and yet its written in such away as to suggest two peoples opposing emotional states, when its really one, thus revealing a somewhat fascinating juxtoposition. Its very good for a first, keep writing my friend~
<3