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I walk home with her.
I walk to school with her.
we talk together.
We laugh to getter.
We share our deepest thoughts together .
She is Beautiful.
I.Love.her
When i asked her out...
These were her words
"I.dont.love.you"
That blank face has come for a visit when she said that
My eyes started to get watery.
I just had to say
"why.dont.you.love.me?"
The girl then replies
" You have a fantastic personality.."
Then i started to smile...
" But your ugly"
The boys face goes from happy to Anger and Sadness.
The boy turns around and starts walking home.
The girl looks and follows slowly.
The boy is at his door.
Turns the door knob
And runs to his room.
Smashes is lights.
Picks up piece of glass.
And slits it across his wrist.
The boy now has a few seconds to live.
He takes his blood and writes
i.still.love.you
On the wall
And dies...
The girl then runs in and sees the dead body on the floor.
And cries and whispers
I. still. love. love.you...............
- by xXgriffinMcrxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/14/2009 |
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- Title: * I don't love you*
- Artist: xXgriffinMcrxX
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Description:
A boy falls in deep love. Sadly... He just gets hurt..badly....
I ment not to be graphic so please dont report. there is a message to this poem and that message is that suicide is not the answer!
- Date: 08/14/2009
- Tags: dont love suicide emotional blood
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Psyjitsu - 08/18/2009
- Oh my god... That is so powerful...
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- scene gurl rofl - 08/14/2009
- WOW i loved it and its so sad =*( almost made me cry...jk but it is GOOD!!! <3
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- Failure and Disfunction - 08/14/2009
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Wow, thats so amazing and true.
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