The Final Cut

• Artist: deth_fan01
• Description: Just some more lyrics that i wrote
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: final

I'm not what I believe I am.
Ice covers my heart,
and my my pulse races faster.

Hemorraging!!!
I'm bleeding out.
The Calamity!!!
Is coming out of me.

Dripping off my blade is my love for you.
Like the cuts on my wrists, you leave scars.
I can't escape this!

Hemorraging!!!
I'm broken now.
The Calamity!!!
Feeds off my pain.

My nerves are shot.
I'm dying faster.
Please help me!
Or this will be my final cut!!

Hemorraging!!!
I'm falling!
The Calamity!!!
Is....ME!!!!

Comments

[ProfessorKC]

I understand paradox ... but ice covers your heart and it beats faster? Also, the emo cutting fixation is well known, putting it in a song form (cause it's not much poetry wise) isn't new and this isn't actually origional. Calamity? Reminds me of bad translations in subtitles on anime. Word choice is bad in spots and ... welll ... I could keep going, but I'll stop . You break the flow of your own writing with the odd punctuation as well ... GAH! Now I'll stop ... the answer is ... no.

[iCandiMandi]

Wow...Wow is all i can say your good!!