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Looking down at you I think about my life
the mistakes I made when the stakes were high
I think about your life and how I loved you so
because now you know i loved you from head to toe
and now your here with me so we can be so happy
because I love you so and you love me
were together now me and you
Im so happy now i dont know what to do
- Title: Me and You
- Artist: dracoguy
- Description: I made this poem as I went and I think its pretty good for my first piece please rate well!!
- Date: 09/03/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 06/04/2010
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It's a sweet and nice first poem. Just, work on you're spelling and grammar, those are the only problems I'm having with it. So I'll say a 4/5. Keep writing!^^
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- puppylover783 - 09/13/2009
- i loved it 5/5
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- xikilla_xula17 - 09/04/2009
- Me to enchanted is beautiful, one kiss.
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