close your eyes

• Artist: Jlouiseost
• Description: i wrote this shortly after my grandma died, i was going to read it at her funeral but i couldnt do it
• Date: 02/12/2010
• Tags: close your eyestear

your hand in mine,
a tear on my cheek,
i wipe it away,
i musn't be weak,
i close my eyes,
i must stay strong,
you didnt deserve wrong,
the memories wont fade,
and neither will our love,
i repeat my goodbyes,
i cannot help but cry,
with a tear on my cheek,
i cannot help it i just feel so weak.

Comments

[missrose134]

Brought tears to my eyes... Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem <3

[Jlouiseost]

@Dagon000
I'm so sorry to hear that.
but thankyou for seeing and knowing and understanding the meaning to my poem; it means a lot.
Take care,

[Dagon000]

I echo "-The Gothic Requiem-" 5/5

i lost my mom 9 years ago and your poem describe the feel when i think of her.

[Jlouiseost]

aww that was really sweet (:
thanks smile

[-The Murderous Shade-]

They say it takes a Boy or Girl to do wrong, but it takes a Woman or Man to stand up to it and make it right.
And with this being posted to the public, you stood up.
Even though your Grandmother is gone, always know she will always be with you. I'm sure she's smiling down at this right now.
5/5.