Monster Within

• Artist: Kurt1013
• Description: This is a poem about how i feel on the inside alot of times...
• Date: 05/15/2010
• Tags: monster within

I feel an itch inside my chest,but there's nothing to scratch. It's the monster within me chewing the inside of me.He goes after my emotions.He mostly eats the good emotions like kindness and courage but doesn't touch humiliation and hate. After that,he goes after my heart,where I keep my love. Then he finally takes over my body.I'm no longer the teenage boy you once knew,but the Monster that grew inside of me.

Comments

[lollipopsy]

Punctuation. Fix it.
Yeah, so... I get what you mean, but you're not expressing it particularly well here, nor being very poetic about it. As a aside, "alot" is not a word.