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woo!! first poem... This is called : Hope ^^
well this is my first poem...it's a free verse poem meaning it doesn't ryhme sweatdrop
just to make me seem a little smarter.... blaugh

Well here it is my poem:
Hope
The sun blazed down on me
there is hope that it will soon happen again
The azure ocean waters were still whispering
there is hope that they will whisper once more
just.....maybe.....maybe once more....

A leaf danced around once in the cool summers breeze
there is hope that the leaves may want to dance in the wind
...... maybe.....just maybe once more.

A new born's eyes twinkled once as the harsh life flashed past them
maybe......just maybe once more that child may have hope
hope....hope to survive....be by their side as they meet the golden gates to
heaven.....

There is hope for everything and everyone no matter how bad
the situation hope is always there.It may... just maybe...come
again ....even if it's just once. There will be hope for:
The sun as it blazes down on us all
the oceans as they still whisper....
whispering the secrets of a new beginning of hope
the leaf will still dance because of hope....
even though...it maybe..just maybe once more 4laugh

I hope u guys like the poem im still gonna carry on writing... the next
journal entry is my insight of time.....:Ninja: heart

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  • User Comments: [2]
    hey

    wonderful poem smile heart smile heart

    comment xX_iiForsak3nH3art_Xx · Community Member · Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 09:49pm
    Thnx!! alex ^-^ 4laugh mrgreen heart

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    comment x-Deathz_Passiion-x · Community Member · Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 05:12pm
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