azulyta Stakie azulyta Stakie azulyta azy offered to help but sounds lile you are doing ok 3nodding @ jule: hiya! I still need help! -shifty eyes- I have no idea if what I am writing is even good. be happy to give you a quick critique if you don't mind sharing what you have.. -tackleglomps- THANK YOU! You are such a life saver. I am so horible at these things but here it is. good start.. with only 93 did you say? ..words to work with, it has to be concise and to the point. like, about 3 or 4 paragraphs worth of whatever you feel you really need to say about this. give each paragraph its own identity. first par.: Music is my life and being a DJ is my dream job! Not only do I get to let the world listen to the music I love but I get to state my opinions with it. . (elaborate. tell how music came into your life, why it means so much.. emotional connections.. common to all cultures etc etc)
second par.: But being a DJ isn't just a job to me it's... a chance (an opportunity.. stronger word) to show the world who I am and what I can do for it in the process.. (elaborate.. how will you do this etc.)
third par., a bit about why you are choosing this particular opportunity, perhaps.. lastly, a tidy conclusion and brief summary.
anyway that's about how i would handle this, hope it is some help.. sweatdrop post it again when you're done and ready for some final polishing.. good luck! That's all I have for now. What do ya' think?
Stakie Heart · Thu Aug 18, 2005 @ 09:43pm · 0 Comments |